Comments on: WE……………THE PEOPLE(PART3)

By: smoking

smoking — Fri, 30 May 2008 04:58:01 +0000

Smoking says : I absolutely agree with this !

By: Ankita S

Ankita S — Sun, 22 Jul 2007 14:56:02 +0000

I don’t think it was too long. In fact you have rushed the story in parts. It would’ve made a great novel too. The language that Angela uses is reminiscent of all the Sifney Sheldon novels and scores of other American pop fiction! And why do you have to make smoking such an integral part of nearly every story? The ending is interesting and I think, in this case, necessary. A ‘lived happily ever after’ would have made the story boring. This way you end with a bang. However, I think Angela is also to blame for all her divorces and her pain. She is not exempt from responsibility. Full marks for your descriptive style and the language. However, pay attention to syntax in the dialogues. The lead female to be stunningly beautiful and rebelliously insolent is quite a stereotype you know. And I certainly believe in life after death. Wonderful observations. You’re wiser than I thought! A great story, I enjoyed reading it very much. But yeah, I’m not sure I like the fact that your boss is the inspiration for Angela.

By: poorva

poorva — Thu, 21 Jun 2007 03:50:30 +0000

ALL D BEST!! well done!!

By: Neha

Neha — Tue, 19 Jun 2007 16:46:54 +0000

lovely post…………..too long though………… but very captivating………this life after death thing definitely makes us think……..nice concept…………………..loved it…………n yeah m sure ur female fan following is gonna rise………. …….. or has it already????

By: Amar

Amar — Tue, 19 Jun 2007 06:41:01 +0000

is this an attempt to win over new readers and fans rapscalion ryder……whatever that means…..well then let me tell you its a succesful attempt and a weird one at that. how could you think of a concept like this. took a while to finally get things you are trying to imply but got there finally and it is better than any of your posts till date, this last post will definitely win you new fans ryder

By: priyanka

priyanka — Mon, 18 Jun 2007 07:25:38 +0000

well…….way too different frm ur earlier ones……n yeah……..too lengthy boss…..hehehheee…….but too good……..the thing dat there is death in this life itself……..true…..very true……..

By: pooja

pooja — Sun, 17 Jun 2007 09:47:17 +0000

very very hard to understand lol but yeah you have written it grippingly i mean its very enticing i liked this particular work. your first two parts in this series were a class apart and you have coped up to the interest leves dont worry. a very offbeat but good post.keep it up